20/05/2009

Gungle Hunt. Lupa and the Pansy Arrows.

8 comments:

pmgl said...

i'm not so enthousiast bout the way the two first frames works in here ( because of the movement of the eyes on the page for the 1st one, plus i dont get what's on the animal'back, a branch? cut the dynamism on the second). But that may be because i also have my bad days ;) I'd shud up there cause the atmosphere's splendid.

pmgl said...

looked at it twice. better. first frame's crazy by itself though, and i got the branch IS the arrow... so be aware you got sum ruually dumb readers somtimes, sorry : )

Rob Davis said...

This is looking beautiful, Warwick and I'll echo yesterday's comments - this one of the best blogs around. I often recommend it to people.

There is something awry in the first panel IMO, I think the white whizz line looks a bit incongruous. I'd have left it out and just had sound effect or sign of impact as the arrow thuds into the prey. Then you can read down the panel and see that arrow has just left the bow.

Nice to find fault really as I'm always left gasping at your stuff.

Mark said...

Mmm, time for a sloth sandwich.

Mark said...

Which reminds me: I was in a band once called "Grunting Sloth".

WJC said...

pm and Rob, thanks lots for your critical interest. It's great to hear. I may adjust that white whizz line.

WJC said...

And hold that Sloth sandwich, for a brief minute anyway.

pmgl said...

f me! of course it's a sloth :)
i'm a big fan of the wite line.
so many different tastes, i'm off for a sandwich trying to find a sloth in the fridge and tell you l8r if it taste like chicken.